游学Essay写作需解决哪些问题？

2）到底所有代用语在上文都有具体仅指的具体来问道；

3）慎重使用value（道德）、character（素质）这种比较只不过的字眼，因为这些用语一般要求下文做出具体暗示来缩小原意，很容易引发内容跳跃。

3、自组必要的问道理暗示Essay写作中所，很多人喜欢用论述句+比如问道这种本体作为主体段的内容。

这种本体的优点是论述一目了然、明确具体；有益是论述和比如问道间容易缺少必要的磨合、比如问道看上去过于全面性。Essay写作对比：

这时，就要通过适当暗示使整段过渡自然现象、层次分明。我们用一个简单比如问道问道明：

案例Raisingprofessors’salary is an effective way to motivate them to spend more time on education.It is well known that private universities in the U.S.pay their professors a higher salary than public universities.

At the same time,these universities are also ranked the highest in most academic rankings,because their professors conducted more academic researches,

contributed more papers to journals,and,on average,spend more time giving instructions and seminars to students.

这个比如问道论述比较明确、也有相应的比如问道；但是论述和比如问道间还是存在一些“顺向”：

Whyare professors NOT motivated in the first place?How would a high salary help?

因为这些疑问未解决、后文比如问道勉强被看做一个泛泛的correlation（相关）而不是严肃的causation（本质）。

那么，什么样的暗示才能把论述和暗示有机联系在一同呢？首先，暗示应当把论述句中所的遗留疑问暗示清。

Raisingprofessors’salary is an effective way to motivate them to spend more time on education.→Professorship requires years ofinvestments in higher education.

However,compared to other educatedprofessions,professors are relatively lower-paid,which means that some ofthem take part-time jobs with private firms in their spare time,

rather thanspend more time on researches.

这样暗示，论述-暗示-比如问道是不是被统一同来了呢？也不完全。因为比如问道只不过还是对段首第一句的暗示问道明、而读者的注意力已经被背着过了几句话。

想让读者的注意力自然现象过渡，

比如问道应当反驳问道理中所自组的论述。…,which means that some of them take part-time jobs with private firms in theirspare time,

rather than spend more time on researches.→It is well known that privateuniversities in the U.S.pay their professors a higher salary than publicuniversities.

In doing so,these universities ensure that professors are paidas much as their equally educated counterparts in large firms such asexecutives or business owners.

At the same time,these universities are alsoranked the highest in most academic rankings,because instead of takingpart-time jobs to subsidize their living,

or working overtime in offices,theirprofessors conducted more academic researches,contributed more papers to journals,and,on average,

spend more time giving instructions and seminars to students.

这时我们看到Viewpoint、explanation、example已经成了一个有机的整体。

以上是对Essay并行的暗示。我建言大家写完后，

仔细归纳你自己的Essay到底检查了，有未按照上述内容完成省铎，以及齐备你从没彻底暗示的内容。一篇好的Essay定要千锤百炼，不可方知。